ripresa (ripresa) wrote,

Short story #2: Feedback welcome

So this is my second short story, the first one is in some ancient computer somewhere.

It's pretty short: 3 pages.

Feedback welcome here on livejournal.

If you read it, thank you for taking the time!

It took me taking thousands and thousands of pictures before I felt like a "real" photographer. And so I figure I should get my first several shitty story writing out of the way.
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